Noisy Room

June 2, 2009
By DarkSun GOLD, Mississauga, Other
DarkSun GOLD, Mississauga, Other
11 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"How clever you are, my dear! You never mean a single word you say." - O.W


A noisy room,
conversation galore.
Gossip is flowing,
paper air planes sore.

Writing is hard,
when pressured with noise.
The voice of the teacher,
the girls and the boys.

But today is different,
I feel free to write.
The noise is inspiring,
it turns on my light.

As everyone’s talking,
I begin to think…
What would I do
if I ran out of ink?

The paper’s my friend,
the ink is my voice.
The pen in my hands
is my weapon of choice.

No I’m not a nerd.
And no I’m not a fighter.
I thought I was a talker,
but I seem to be a writer.


The author's comments:
One of the very first poems I have ever written.
I started to write in English class, while a supply teacher was strggling to teach us....... I wish I could tell you.

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on Nov. 16 2013 at 4:01 pm
micshea99 PLATINUM, Matthews, North Carolina
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Love this!! It kind of reminds me of my poem "The Writer"... I would love for you to read it!

on Dec. 9 2010 at 11:38 am
starsandotherthings BRONZE, Grand Isle, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
" To be old and wise, you must first be young and stupid" "Paper is more patient than man"

i like the last four lines, its my favorite

on Aug. 1 2010 at 4:57 pm
nickykens ELITE, Draper, Utah
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This is absolutely fantastic!  I really, really like it!  My favorite is the last eight lines because damn I can relate!  Good job, very, very good job.

on Jan. 11 2010 at 7:16 am
hurting_real_bad SILVER, Conneaut, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
“Yes I love him. I love him more than anything else in this world and there is nothing that I would like better than to hold on to him forever. But I know it's not for the best. So no matter how much my heart is going to break, I've got to let him go so he can know just how much I love him. Maybe if I'm lucky, he'll come back, but if not, I can make it through this.”

That was great i loved it

Bethani GOLD said...
on Dec. 21 2009 at 9:13 pm
Bethani GOLD, Highlands Ranch, Colorado
10 articles 0 photos 508 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is perfect until you sit back and realize how boring it is without risks.

I couldn't have said it better! Writing is wonderful and don't you dare let anyone make you think otherwise. Keep it up! You can say whatever you want.

on Dec. 3 2009 at 7:15 pm
MisterCake SILVER, Temple City, California
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oh this was fun to read (:! very nice for a first poem, I enjoyed it, really I did!

on Oct. 2 2009 at 7:39 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

this is really good! for a beginning poet you did really well :) the rhyming is great and it flows beautifully. i relate to the content in the poem, so i really love it ;) great job...5 stars :) check out and comment some of my work please, i really love the feedback :)


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