Lonely: A Tanka

April 6, 2009
By Zakiametoo GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
Zakiametoo GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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In the park alone,
Rustling leaves are my shivers.
I wish for your warmth,
Your embrace like stretching limbs
of trees. Instead, I am cold.



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on Dec. 16 2010 at 10:31 pm
Zakiametoo GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
15 articles 0 photos 5 comments
Aw thank you!! That means a lot to me. I'm so glad you liked it and used it.

on Dec. 16 2010 at 4:17 pm
TrickrTreat GOLD, Fowlerville, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"If you're good at something, never do it for free." -The Dark Knight

I absolutely love this! I used it for an example of a Tanka  in my Creative Expressions class:)


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