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Lonely: A Tanka

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In the park alone,
Rustling leaves are my shivers.
I wish for your warmth,
Your embrace like stretching limbs
of trees. Instead, I am cold.





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TrickrTreat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 4:17 pm
I absolutely love this! I used it for an example of a Tanka  in my Creative Expressions class:)
 
Zakiametoo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 10:31 pm
Aw thank you!! That means a lot to me. I'm so glad you liked it and used it.
 
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