Invisible

April 6, 2009
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I see you
But you don’t see me.
I hear you
But you don’t hear me-or care what I say
To you I am just a ripple in the tidal wave
Of your life.
I am nothing…

You are my everything.
But your eyes see through me
As if I am a brief mist.
I might not be the rock atop the mountain’s mighty face
But am I less important than the stones that form the base?

But for your concerns…
I am everything…I am everything.





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Ciara M. said...
Apr. 16, 2009 at 8:46 pm
That was awesome kid keep it up!
 
Aliyah said...
Apr. 16, 2009 at 6:25 pm
Wow. thats really good; very touching. This poem really speaks to me, well, not quite to the extream of "everything".
Well done.
 
savannah.kulenic. said...
Apr. 16, 2009 at 1:00 pm
this is a reallyyyy good poem but consider reworkinggg...yur topic is a good one to express. trust me rework it a lil and yu mite be surprized
 
musicgirl757 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 15, 2009 at 9:17 pm
Creative, original, and I can relate to this. I like that, great work!
 
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