April 6, 2009
By Dylan Jackson SILVER, Cushing, Oklahoma
Dylan Jackson SILVER, Cushing, Oklahoma
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I see you
But you don’t see me.
I hear you
But you don’t hear me-or care what I say
To you I am just a ripple in the tidal wave
Of your life.
I am nothing…

You are my everything.
But your eyes see through me
As if I am a brief mist.
I might not be the rock atop the mountain’s mighty face
But am I less important than the stones that form the base?

But for your concerns…
I am everything…I am everything.

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Ciara Murch said...
on Apr. 16 2009 at 8:46 pm
Ciara Murch, Buffalo, New York
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That was awesome kid keep it up!

Aliyah said...
on Apr. 16 2009 at 6:25 pm
Wow. thats really good; very touching. This poem really speaks to me, well, not quite to the extream of "everything".

Well done.

on Apr. 16 2009 at 1:00 pm
this is a reallyyyy good poem but consider reworkinggg...yur topic is a good one to express. trust me rework it a lil and yu mite be surprized

on Apr. 15 2009 at 9:17 pm
IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Hey, assbutt!" Supernatural, Castiel.

Creative, original, and I can relate to this. I like that, great work!


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