Love Hurts

April 6, 2009
By Naomi SILVER, Milo, Maine
Naomi SILVER, Milo, Maine
7 articles 2 photos 10 comments

Love Hurts

Love stays with you forever
even when the love fades away
the pain is still sitting there
just pulling down on my heart
causing tears to flow

The butterflies still there
fluttering in my stomach
wish they would go away

is love supposed to feel like this?
The emptiness hurts inside
its just the way it feels
like a sharp object against the skin

The tears you shed
running down your cheek
the vibe that you get
and you know
he doesn't love you back

Its always there
its the feeling of love
your first TRUE love


The author's comments:
Its just about life in general, and about how a lot of teens feel when they get their heart broken.

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Naomi SILVER said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 5:23 pm
Naomi SILVER, Milo, Maine
7 articles 2 photos 10 comments
Thanks a million for your comment, i need to know what people are thinking of my work (: thanks againn

Naomi SILVER said...
on Apr. 23 2009 at 5:26 pm
Naomi SILVER, Milo, Maine
7 articles 2 photos 10 comments
Thanks for the comments :D

on Apr. 18 2009 at 11:25 pm
Not_year_but_Forever SILVER, Belleville, Illinois
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the pain is still here inside me gosh i love this poem

on Apr. 16 2009 at 10:46 pm
psycholinzmeier GOLD, Kaukauna, Wisconsin
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wow u got it exactly right

great poem




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