Love At First Sight

April 6, 2009
By Diamondlu SILVER, La, Georgia
Diamondlu SILVER, La, Georgia
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I looked up

And I saw you for the first time

The way your blue eyes sparkled

You took my breath away

I knew then and there

That I didn’t like the idea of
anyone else having you

I wanted to make you mine

But I was too shy

And soon we had to say goodbye

We still talked

We became friends

But that just wasn’t enough for me

I tried to move on

But you were always there in the
back of my mind

I couldn’t be happy with anyone

One day you asked me a question

And it seemed all my prayers had
been answered

Because everything I had been trying to find

I now have

And I will never be able to bare

to see you with someone else

For you to hold someone how you hold me now

For you to kiss them

To meet their eyes with the look with so much love that you give me

It would be too much to bare

And I know now that look that we shared the first time

That was the look of

Love at first site

The author's comments:
This isn't exactly fiction, seeing as it was pretty much the first time I saw my boyfriend, but we didn't start going out a year later and i wrote this about nine months after we started going out.

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Chelsea222 said...
on Apr. 18 2009 at 6:14 pm
Chelsea222, Aurora, Colorado
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nice poem =)


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