you are the perfection never captured, unreal, untrue

April 5, 2009
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my thoughts are too lonely to share with others
who would not comprehend
or care

the way we speak, inverted colloquialism
connected through wires...

We try too hard.
"you can't force something"
we can't fix anything
sorry for everything.
i'm not forgiving

hollow faults on

hallowed ground
you are for giving

invisible appreciation
existing attempts
i really cannot assist
but you need to

all about you, dear
let's shift and moods will too
breaking focus to make me move
too much work leads to force
"you can't force something"
following is not your forte
you are forgiving, we try too hard on hallowed ground

shattered and imagining
corrupt my security
i don't think there is a euphemism or a cure

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Lola_Black said...
Nov. 7, 2011 at 6:06 pm
Amazing poem! My only complaint woiuld be the complete and utter lack of capitalization; but since it's a poem, I guess it doesn't matter. Do you mind reading some of my stuff? That would be great. ♥
edith111 said...
May 15, 2011 at 6:28 pm
there is wonderful -- there are a lot of bad pieces on this website, so this is so refreshing! i love the language used, and it was so relatable. 
through_my_eyes said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 7:40 pm
i likeeee! Its very good :)
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