lights out

April 4, 2009
By twiwrite GOLD, Modesto, California
twiwrite GOLD, Modesto, California
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the lights go out around me
myheart is fallingthrough the holes
i reach and i cant feel it
slipping through my fingers
like im a goast lost in time
never fully grasping what i want.
loseing hold on all my dreams
tiny pin pricks that are my tears mean not6hing
i lie to myself
i lie to you
i lie to them
walking through life,
with glanceing blows hitting me
a constant war waged within my head
a light flicks on
somewhere lost in the distance
to dim to be sure
its hope
but i cant find it
it flickers every time you speak,
with every thought
can i make it stay?
or will it go out?



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BelmaH said...
on Feb. 11 2010 at 3:44 pm
I liked this a lot!

Tim-.- SILVER said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 3:37 pm
Tim-.- SILVER, Markham, Other
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We all screw up sometimes, just some people more than others

A really beautifully wrought poem :D

GOD JOB :D

on Jan. 9 2010 at 8:42 pm
winterdrifts SILVER, Wilton, Connecticut
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wow i really like the idea and the mood you created but like brittneylynn said, it just needs some proof reading. keep writing!

on Jan. 9 2010 at 2:15 pm
BrittneyLynn BRONZE, W. Richland, Washington
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"One who saves another, has saved the entire world."

Good idea for a poem, a few typos but besides that it's really good.




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