Uncared For

April 4, 2009
By J.R.Hensel BRONZE, Mexia, Texas
J.R.Hensel BRONZE, Mexia, Texas
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My heart is in pain
No one can grasp why I hold back
They don't care either
But, for what reason should my suffering
be the reason for other's concern.
I'm not that important.
Not important at all...
So, why share my suffering with those around me?
If anyone cared, I wouldn't have to...

The author's comments:
Despite the generally dark tone of this peice, I am actually a reletively happy person, however I find happiness a boring topic. This is my first post on Teenink.com, enjoy and critisize.

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on Oct. 6 2010 at 4:06 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson

I find happy stuff boring too. but occasionally I like to give it a happy twist at the end. Thats always nice. 


I really like your poem. Another "thinking" poem. Thanks Jeff. I need to think. School's too boring for me. haha :P

on May. 29 2010 at 1:22 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

This is really sad! People do care....Publish some happy stuff okay? (This may sound mean but you always make fun of my laugh and lisp, so it's just my way of being friendly.)


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