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Sweet Sixteen

February 19, 2009
By RoseChild23 SILVER, Iola, Kansas
RoseChild23 SILVER, Iola, Kansas
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Sweet sixteen time flies so fast
Hold on to hope don't let it pass
Don't let that sparkle leave your eyes
Don't let heartbreak steal your life
Don't let love unrequited
Keep you from your happy ending
Of all the fish in the sea
Don't hold the one that set you free


The author's comments:
It took me a long time, but I finally figured out he wasn't worth the pain anymore, which inspired this piece of writing.

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on Apr. 22 2009 at 10:27 pm
rootbeerfloat92 GOLD, Fort Meade, Maryland
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Wow, I'm just realizing what you realized. Thanks for putting it out there for me. =)

on Apr. 21 2009 at 12:34 am
RoseChild23 SILVER, Iola, Kansas
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Thank you, Becca!

Becca SILVER said...
on Apr. 16 2009 at 3:20 pm
Becca SILVER, Auburndale, Florida
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I really like this, how if flows is really neat and so true

keep writing =]