the day i died

April 2, 2009
By jazzychild SILVER, SAN ANTONIO, Texas
jazzychild SILVER, SAN ANTONIO, Texas
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The day I died was yesterday
Cause it took my breath away
I feel ashamed of myself
For the things that I felt
Confused, alone, and dark
That was how I left my mark
Upon the world that rejected me
I bet they shout with glee
I found myself all alone
Yet my body feels of stone
The tears I weep no one cares
It’s just because I’m full of despair
The things I say are never heard
Just in one ear and out the other
I come to you my dear friend
But you turn and go away
Why do the ones I care for
Always leave, leave
Me as the one to blame for all the pain
I bleed I cry I have feelings too
You just never feel do you?
The day I died was yesterday
No one cried because I died
No one cares that I’m hurt
And torn up inside, why me I plead
To the light blue


The author's comments:
this is a poem i wrote as i was in great is easy to comprehend if your life is confusing and you feel all alone

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Brndi said...
on Apr. 14 2009 at 8:15 pm
wow i totally understand where you were comming from here.. it has so much feeling put behind it. keep it up this poem is amazing :)

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