In the End.

March 25, 2009
By superboii57 BRONZE, Torrington, Connecticut
superboii57 BRONZE, Torrington, Connecticut
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Just a girl stuck in this mysterious world, with no way out if opt ionized.

A girl with many questions that will never be asked, so there for never be answered.

One with thoughts but no visions.

A girl with more pride than you think.

A girl who doesn’t believe in Love but believes there’s a lot more too it than just caring.

A girl who has learned a lot just from one experience.

One who knows everything happens for a reason, and has learned to accept things as they go.

A girl who now will never take less than she deserves or more than she needs.

One who loves rainbows and believes they have a lot more meaning than just color;

in fact they could change the worst day to the best.

A girl who doesn’t let peoples opinions, statements, or rude judgmental comments get to her because she knows peoples opinions cant change who she is.

One who loves rain but would be lost without those rainbows.

A girl who would do anything just to hear an animal speak their mind.

One who doesn’t believe in hatred but does believe in discouragement.

One who believes stereotyping or judging one another is just expressing one another’s fear.

A girl who is learning to let go and give up when she needs to.

A girl who knows what she wants in life, but knows its going to take a lot to get.

One who finally knows who and who not to trust.

A girl who shows her emotions but knows her limits.

A girl with many friends but knows who she can truly count on;

(herself, the very own best friend).

One who has lost a lot of great things in life because her actions.

A girl who wishes you could understand but knows you never could.

One who has taken things for grant way too much and didn’t realize it until now.

A girl who yes has made mistakes, but has also learned from them too.

A girl with a totally different mind than you, and thinks way to deep into things.

A girl who knows to believe in herself before she believes in anything else.

A girl who has over come her fear of self conscience.

A girl you might never understand; but finally understands herself.

The author's comments:
I wrote this piece to tell how i came along, out of my worries and fears and found my true self.

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This article has 9 comments.

daisypop14 said...
on May. 13 2009 at 3:47 pm
Omg this is really great! im so glad that u r writing.. its good for the mind and the soul....

Tanyaa said...
on May. 12 2009 at 6:56 pm

on Apr. 16 2009 at 4:53 pm
This writing, is truely amazing.

i dont think ive ever read anything so exquisite, its beautiful. Keep up the good work :D

carah c. said...
on Apr. 14 2009 at 11:50 pm
wow, this is a veryy powerful poem. I really like it, and I think it should be published and sold. Good job with makeing people feel how you feel. Keep it up girll (:

on Apr. 14 2009 at 7:13 pm

on Apr. 14 2009 at 5:38 pm
your work is AMAZING!

your thoughts and point of view are outstanding.

you get straight to the point and thats what i like the most,

i expecially like the authors comments/notes, i think your idea/point was really strong.

keep up the good work.

on Apr. 14 2009 at 5:28 pm
wow..this poem is speechless. When i read this poem, i just had to read it over and over again like 5 times haha it really has a good vibe to it; such work should be published for more people to read, because i honestly i have a whole new perspective on life now just because of another human beings words. Your words are really strong and i feel that you should keep up the good work and keep writing and share your possative additude with the rest of the world. Good luck!

on Apr. 14 2009 at 5:23 pm
oh my goodness this poem is brillient, i have never honestly read anything like it, you have really good ideas, and i think you would be an awesome writer. I really enjoyed reading this the words and statments just really popped out and me. The meaning to your poem is powerful and actully gave me a new perspective on life, you seem like a really bright girl. good luck in the future and i hope you write more (:

on Apr. 14 2009 at 5:12 pm
i loved it, it was great;

it shows alot of emotion behind it; wich is in my opinion tha' best part of a poem. it really was good; keep it up, that was by far tha' best i've heard yet. <3

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