what happened.

March 31, 2009
By Anonymous

Houses and trees start to come together, as if were in a dream.
The silence tears us apart, like daggers to our heads.
We're both thinking the same thing.
The same scene runs through my head a million times. Nothing seems too click.
I hear you trying to steady youre breaths. I know it's for the same reason why mine is suddenly gone.
The scene runs again this time harder than the last, this time something that seemed soo surreal has become reality.
Im scared now.
The future which is usually predictable and clear is hazey and unsure.
A tear falls, i quickly catch it hoping you didnt notice.
My heart now out of beat, my thoughts out of place.
You grab my hand, i jump.
Every moment lead up to this.
Every night i prayed for this never too happen.
Someday came suddenly.
I know the words even before you spoke them, each word hits like a hammer.
The pain of the words.
The sound of youre voice.
The only things that matter.
Once the words are out i know what just happened.
It's over now.


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lovely_laura said...
on Apr. 17 2009 at 1:21 am
This is very well written, though there are some simple errors but still this is very good. Well Done!

on Apr. 13 2009 at 2:01 am
biggerinfinities SILVER, Superior, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
“We accept the love we think we deserve.”
― Stephen Chbosky, The Perks of Being a Wallflower

quite good... but it was slightly wordy... could you make it more simplistic?

on Apr. 11 2009 at 3:51 am
Hannah:] SILVER, Temperance, Michigan
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Nice! It's very captivatiing, it grabbed my attention and held it! good job!




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