March 31, 2009
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Son watches father
hopelessly plowing the fields
with embarrassed eyes

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forever_dancer said...
Apr. 13, 2009 at 2:05 am
hmmmm... simple, yet so could you choose another word for embaressed? otherwise, it is fantastic
musicgirl757 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 10, 2009 at 4:12 pm
Its a good begining, but i thnik you coulda done more with this. try making it a little longer. otherwise i thought it was pretty much brilliant
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