My Love is as Big as...

March 31, 2009
By radicalx3rach BRONZE, Burlington, Kentucky
radicalx3rach BRONZE, Burlington, Kentucky
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Your words are as comforting as a band-aid
on a little toddler’s boo-boo.
They are like new fleece from the store.

You ask, how big is my love?

It’s as big as a dinosaur compared to a pebble.

It’s as big as the princess’ stack of

never ending pillows on top of the pea.

It’s as big as the boom of the fireworks

on the Fourth of July.

Your hugs are as magnificent as a mom
taking care of her sick baby.
They are warm freshly baked bread.

I love you because you are flowers
on a frigid winter night.


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on Apr. 10 2009 at 2:59 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This is a really good poem! I love it!


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