All Alone

April 2, 2009
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She cried softly, her tears streaming down her cheeks

Her body shuddered making her bones creak,
Her heart was aching, her soul withdrawn, her mind was screaming

She didn’t want her lone to be gone.
The snow was cold to her numb form, it seemed the fragile barrier

That held off the inevitable storm.
She could only watch as the flames devoured the one she loved

Could only cry softly as her love drifted toward the heavens above.

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BrokenAngel said...
Apr. 30, 2009 at 1:13 pm
listen everyone i made a typo on line five, the word is supposed to be "love" not "lone" my apologies everyone.
SilverMoon said...
Apr. 21, 2009 at 12:06 am
This is sad and really good. I like it a lot. Keep writing your really talented!
xXxFallingTearsxXx said...
Apr. 16, 2009 at 10:54 pm
Wow, that is a really good poem. it's kinda sad, but i really like it, great job! you should check out mine :)
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