All Alone

April 2, 2009
By BrokenAngel GOLD, Pinellas Park, Florida
BrokenAngel GOLD, Pinellas Park, Florida
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She cried softly, her tears streaming down her cheeks

Her body shuddered making her bones creak,
Her heart was aching, her soul withdrawn, her mind was screaming

She didn’t want her lone to be gone.
The snow was cold to her numb form, it seemed the fragile barrier

That held off the inevitable storm.
She could only watch as the flames devoured the one she loved

Could only cry softly as her love drifted toward the heavens above.


The author's comments:
when i was writing this, i was remember the pain i had gone through of losing someone i loved. Alot of what i write is based off of memories.

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on Apr. 30 2009 at 1:13 pm
BrokenAngel GOLD, Pinellas Park, Florida
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listen everyone i made a typo on line five, the word is supposed to be "love" not "lone" my apologies everyone.

SilverMoon said...
on Apr. 21 2009 at 12:06 am
This is sad and really good. I like it a lot. Keep writing your really talented!

on Apr. 16 2009 at 10:54 pm
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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Wow, that is a really good poem. it's kinda sad, but i really like it, great job! you should check out mine :)


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