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Suffering

April 2, 2009
By SwAgG_sErIoUs BRONZE, Sumter, South Carolina
SwAgG_sErIoUs BRONZE, Sumter, South Carolina
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It is 9:30am and we are at school
You tell me you love me…I don’t respond cause I’m tired of all the drama
So when you tell me you love me…I don’t care because your love is no where near sweet…
It is solid cold and tastes very bitter
You get mad when you realize I don’t care so you hit me…
I look at you with despair and start to cry…like many times before…
I walk away tryin’ to hide the pain I have deep inside…For long I have had this feeling in my heart…
It is challenging and we struggle to discover what was inside…
Only to realize…I love you but hate you at the same time
You chase me and tell me you’re sorry…and like always… I forgive you. So everything is all good… for now…
At 10:30pm you come get me…you say we need to talk…funny I was thinking the same,
So we go for a drive
Instantly, our talking leads to arguing.. arguing leads to shouting…
I tell you I don’t want to be with you anymore, I tell you I’m tired of you hurting me…
I see you are angry but I then realize the car is swerving…
I shout, “SLOW DOWN!!!”
But it’s too late…the truck is coming too fast…
¡BOOM!
Lights flash before my eyes…I hear sirens and people screaming…and for a split second,
I see my family…
Paramedics arrive but it’s too late, there’s no one to save…
…it’s over…the pain is finally over…


The author's comments:
This was originally an essay for class and I usually don't write like this but I wanted to think out of my element.

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delly BRONZE said...
on Apr. 10 2009 at 12:07 am
delly BRONZE, CH, New Jersey
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That's very sad but very good writing! Good job!