Dark vs Light | Teen Ink

Dark vs Light

April 2, 2009
By JordanElyse BRONZE, Wasilla, Alaska
JordanElyse BRONZE, Wasilla, Alaska
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The violet sky darkens
As she hesitaties in the doorway
Paralized in fear
At the single thought
Of crossing
The hallway is silent
Ominously sitll
Like a siberian wasteland
Stepping out
Into the ferocious cold
The stunning silence
And the intence stillness
The dusk approaches
The dark pierces
Like a bayonet
Seeping in
And closing around
Until...
A single
Sublime
Ray of light
Extinguishes
The dark



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on Apr. 23 2009 at 11:56 pm
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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I really like your poem, you have a way of putting the words that makes it sound really good! I rated yours a five, because I think it is so good!