April 2, 2009
Your dark eyes watch me as my life goes nowhere fast.
I look for hope in the future, but all I can see is the past.
I remember that rainy August night,
When I realized that you would not fight,
Not to save me, or anyone else,
But still,I loved you, I was under your spells.

I was wrong when I thought that you loved me too,
To look past your hate filled eyes was all that I could do.
You mislead me when you said we were meant to be,
But your love was false, something that I could not see.
And now you are the cause of all my hate,
But you are now, selfishly, too late.

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Briisfalling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 13, 2009 at 3:34 am
Thanks for commenting on my poem by the way. I like this poem. It reminds of something I wrote in my journal a couple of months ago. I love Alyson Noel too! I just read Evermore a couple of days ago!
innergenious745 said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 4:12 am
I really love it! thanks for commenting on article by the way. Yours is nice too i rated it a five ; ) Keep writing you're really good :)
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