To: You; From: Me

By , Sacramento, CA
Dear:
You
You're so critical of:
Me.
Always yelling at:
Me.
Think you know what's best for:
Me.
Everyone sees you hate:
Me.

I don't need:
You.
I don't want you:
You.
Don't need to hear:
You.
It hurts me to know:
You.

At first I thought you liked:
Me.
You were just pushing:
Me.
Success was what you wanted for:
Me.

I adored:
You.
I trusted:
You.
I thought that I needed:
You.
I'm just a pawn in a scheme from:
You.

You think you own:
Me.
Think you control:
Me.
But I want to let you know, I know:
Me.
Think you can get to:
Me.

Think Again.

I'll succeed without:
You.
I'll do my best to defeat:
You.
So this is to remind:
You.
I don't fear:
You.


Love:
Me





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DanaChi said...
Nov. 2, 2009 at 7:15 pm
I think that was beautiful, very touching and open to words depth.
Good Job want to hear more.
D.
 
xXxFlamingWaterxXx said...
Apr. 10, 2009 at 3:31 am
i loved this poem. i thought it was very well written, and beautiful.
 
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