A Love Cycle

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If you ever get a broken heart,
can it ever be fixed?
And when your heart gets broken
Until your heart can't get broken anymore,
Will it actually start to disapper?
But then, when you think it's lost forever,
You fall in love again.
Even though you think your heart is going to burst open,
You can't help it.
And as time goes on,
You find your heart growing back,
good as new.
No cracks.
Your heart is whole once more.





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EdytD said...
Aug. 27, 2009 at 1:30 am
I like the idea; I think if you perhaps described the breaking of the heart literally, or gave the pain, the cracks, some imagery - it would be a poem that the reader can really imagine in his/ her mind. Great job!
 
daisydee123 said...
May 4, 2009 at 12:15 am
very well done. you wrote what seems imposible but can really happen. bravo once more!
 
darkangel1326 said...
Apr. 30, 2009 at 3:15 am
ur poem is good too. :D thanx 4 the comment
 
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