The Break

April 1, 2009
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A crack and a sickening thud
Falling in to the mud
Screaming out in pain
Stings like acid rain

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MEE said...
Apr. 27, 2009 at 5:59 pm
a nice poem
marta said...
Apr. 20, 2009 at 6:13 pm
marta said...
Apr. 14, 2009 at 4:10 pm
OUCH!! That must have hurt! Nice poem.
DustBuster said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 1:47 pm
Gr8t :)
Josie said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 1:21 pm
Cool poem:)
iliketac0s replied...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 2:38 pm
wait how come you complimented your own poem jw.
Josie said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 12:05 am
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