The Break

April 1, 2009
By Josie BRONZE, Montclair, New Jersey
Josie BRONZE, Montclair, New Jersey
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A crack and a sickening thud
Falling in to the mud
Screaming out in pain
Stings like acid rain


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on Apr. 9 2010 at 2:38 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

wait how come you complimented your own poem jw.

MEE said...
on Apr. 27 2009 at 5:59 pm
a nice poem

marta said...
on Apr. 20 2009 at 6:13 pm
cute

marta said...
on Apr. 14 2009 at 4:10 pm
OUCH!! That must have hurt! Nice poem.

DustBuster said...
on Apr. 11 2009 at 1:47 pm
Gr8t :)

Josie BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2009 at 1:21 pm
Josie BRONZE, Montclair, New Jersey
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Cool poem:)

Josie BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2009 at 12:05 am
Josie BRONZE, Montclair, New Jersey
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:)




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