Rocket

April 1, 2009
By Superchil909 GOLD, New Prague, Minnesota
Superchil909 GOLD, New Prague, Minnesota
12 articles 4 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
The person who said winning isn't everything, never won anything. ~ Mia Hamm


Speeds down the track
A kid the day after Halloween,
Always.
Hops and skips
With a little zip.
A jog, a sprint
Or halfway in between.
That "Gotta get there walk"
With nowhere to be.
Just bursting with excitment Waiting to explode.


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on Apr. 20 2009 at 2:02 am
Superchil909 GOLD, New Prague, Minnesota
12 articles 4 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
The person who said winning isn't everything, never won anything. ~ Mia Hamm

Sorry, That is how it is supposed to be i just typed it wrong. Thank you for telling me what you think!!

vivaeno said...
on Apr. 15 2009 at 9:02 pm
I like it a lot! It is full of strong descriptive words. One thing I think would help the flow is to split the last line so that the final line reads "Waiting to explode."

Great job!

on Apr. 12 2009 at 2:35 pm
Superchil909 GOLD, New Prague, Minnesota
12 articles 4 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
The person who said winning isn't everything, never won anything. ~ Mia Hamm

Please tell me what you think. I greatly appreciate construcdtive critisim.


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