April 1, 2009
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Speeds down the track
A kid the day after Halloween,
Hops and skips
With a little zip.
A jog, a sprint
Or halfway in between.
That "Gotta get there walk"
With nowhere to be.
Just bursting with excitment Waiting to explode.

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Superchil909 said...
Apr. 20, 2009 at 2:02 am
Sorry, That is how it is supposed to be i just typed it wrong. Thank you for telling me what you think!!
vivaeno said...
Apr. 15, 2009 at 9:02 pm
I like it a lot! It is full of strong descriptive words. One thing I think would help the flow is to split the last line so that the final line reads "Waiting to explode."
Great job!
Superchil909 said...
Apr. 12, 2009 at 2:35 pm
Please tell me what you think. I greatly appreciate construcdtive critisim.
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