Needles on the Heart

Her eyes pierce my skin
like a dubble edged sword
Her eyes are like magic
they mesmerise me
yet her scorn is like the fires of hell
So her love is like needles to my heart
it stings and stays
the things that she does with her eyes
are the things of love
and hate
but that is passion for you
She makes me sing
and scream
She drove me nuts
taking me by the ear to the loony bin
Now I'm alone
and have the feeling of emptyness
But at least I have the love she left
the needles that still sit and stick in my heart
Now is time to just let her go
the one I loved





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GlassHeart said...
Aug. 1, 2009 at 6:05 pm
I like it. Great work.
 
Mikal said...
May 15, 2009 at 6:59 am
I love the metaphors in this poem. Did u ever befriend her agian? Oh check out my new poem: A letter to love
 
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