~One Girl~

March 24, 2009
By TaylorDean BRONZE, London, Arkansas
TaylorDean BRONZE, London, Arkansas
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One girl wants her one daddy,
One dad who left his one girlfriend and his first daughter.
One girl who needs her father, has one step dad how can't give her what she wants. One girl who has half a heart.
She needs her one daddy to give her the other half of her heart.
With one parent that loves her. That one girl has a dream that her one father will come back to save her.


The author's comments:
my father left me when he found out my mother was pregnet. i wish he would come and find me cause i can't handle not kowning my real father.

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on May. 11 2010 at 10:11 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow. this is really good. its really heartbreaking, and i like the emotion you put into this. i bet this really bothers you sometimes, but you make beautiful poetry from some of the most painful things (: it's a great piece. bravo, 5 stars (: would you mind commenting on some of my work? and PLEASE keep writing (:




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