Shut Up!!

March 26, 2009
All these voices
So many choices
To do good or bad
They make me mad

People say I’m insane
They call me bane
But I’m just misunderstood
The voices say I’m good

“Shut up” I tell the voices again
Why oh why do they remain
They only make me psychotic
My thoughts are always chaotic

“Shh,” they say, “relax”
Just one more swing of an axe
Then all of your problems will end
You could have your life, again

Then my head fills up with pain
And they’re messing with my brain
The pain only gets worse and worse
Until I finally kill my curse

Yes my problems have gone astray
But still, today, the voices stay
They tell me what to say or do
So much for the life I once knew

Join the Discussion

This article has 5 comments. Post your own now!

dancestar said...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 8:32 pm
great job...ur work has a bit of a sad and scary touch to all very realisitc and amazing!
sadisticpsycho replied...
Sept. 18, 2011 at 1:03 pm
thnx!! thats what i was going for XD
BloodRose said...
May 29, 2009 at 3:02 am
this is an awesome piece! the voices in peoples heads are crazy...and you captured tht so well!
sadisticpsycho replied...
Oct. 27, 2009 at 7:14 pm
thank you. im glad you enjoyed my work
Heather A. replied...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 11:30 am
that was amazing i love ur work!!
Site Feedback