Shut Up!!

March 26, 2009
By sadisticpsycho PLATINUM, Congers, New York
sadisticpsycho PLATINUM, Congers, New York
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All these voices
So many choices
To do good or bad
They make me mad

People say I’m insane
They call me bane
But I’m just misunderstood
The voices say I’m good

“Shut up” I tell the voices again
Why oh why do they remain
They only make me psychotic
My thoughts are always chaotic

“Shh,” they say, “relax”
Just one more swing of an axe
Then all of your problems will end
You could have your life, again

Then my head fills up with pain
And they’re messing with my brain
The pain only gets worse and worse
Until I finally kill my curse

Yes my problems have gone astray
But still, today, the voices stay
They tell me what to say or do
So much for the life I once knew


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on Sep. 18 2011 at 1:03 pm
sadisticpsycho PLATINUM, Congers, New York
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thnx!! thats what i was going for XD

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on Aug. 23 2011 at 8:32 pm
dancestar GOLD, Westford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
BE WHO YOU WANNA BE NOT WHO OTHERS WANNA SEE!!!

great job...ur work has a bit of a sad and scary touch to it..bt all very realisitc and amazing!

on Jan. 25 2010 at 11:30 am
heather argeneau GOLD, Highland Falls, New York
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that was amazing i love ur work!!

on Oct. 27 2009 at 7:14 pm
sadisticpsycho PLATINUM, Congers, New York
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thank you. im glad you enjoyed my work

on May. 29 2009 at 3:02 am
Love_Kills_the_Blind PLATINUM, Fort Collins, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Never regret anything, at one point its exactly what you wanted."

this is an awesome piece! the voices in peoples heads are crazy...and you captured tht so well!


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