The Planet Of Sadness

March 24, 2009
By Confused-Supa-Girl BRONZE, Hernando, Mississippi
Confused-Supa-Girl BRONZE, Hernando, Mississippi
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One day my friends and I took a trip to the planet Sadness

But, When we were on the rocket the room was full of gladness

When we jumped out of the rocket the atmosphere began to change

There were black stormy clouds beginning to arrange

I felt tears stream down my eyes as I saw what I Saw

other crying human beings looking at us all

Then I was the one all by theirself

as all my friends ditched me for someone else

The author's comments:
My piece is about the troubles in my life with some of my friends,they leave me for someone else when we can all be together.

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