The Identity of No One

August 10, 2017
By afire01 BRONZE, NY, New York
afire01 BRONZE, NY, New York
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Have you ever stayed up late one night and thought to yourself, Who am I?

Or what do I wanna be? 


I rather figure that out on my own instead of Stealing someone's identity.


So, Who am I?

I’m the girl that cares a little too much instead of just enough

I am the daughter of 2 dominicans

I am the fourth J

I was born and raised in New York State

I am the youngest of 4

I am my sisters pride and joy


Now, you ask me what I wanna be

I’ll say it proudly

I wanna be the person you can come to in your time of need,

The cousin they can look up to,

I wanna be the daughter my father comes back to,

I wanna be the person who I strive to be,

I wanna be the best that I can be.

But, there's a difference between want and will,

This i'll say slowly...

I will be the older sister my father's daughters look up to

I will be a high school graduate

I will be the best I can be

I will continue building my identity

I will be someone my family can be proud of

I will stay faithful to my religon

I will do these things because only one person can stop me

The only one who can tell me I can’t

Me, Myself, and I


But i’ll fight against that negativity and replace it with positivity

Because that's my identity.

And I will succeed. 

The author's comments:

When people read this I want them to analyze who they are and who they are going to be.

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