Piece It Back Together

March 23, 2009
As my world slowly crumbles,
I try to hold on,
And piece back the puzzle,
That's been gone for so long.

I keep finding parts,
Scattered here and there.
I try to fit them in,
But I don't know where.

Some pieces are big,
Others are small,
I always have to wonder
If I'll ever find them all.

I feel like I'm torn,
Tattered and tethered,
As clouds float above,
That keep bringing rainy weather.

I hold it all together,
And try to be strong.
I think that I may last,
But I don't know for how long.

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xxJustxxMe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 12, 2009 at 12:20 am
i don't think it's boring really, i think it's sureal. either way, nice poem
(=amanda=) said...
Apr. 6, 2009 at 7:54 pm
albert-thanks and your welcome =) lol

zoe-thanks for your honesty
Zoe R. said...
Apr. 5, 2009 at 10:44 pm
its ok. nice image but the way you lay it out is a bit-(dare i say it?!!)- boring. it needs a bit of work. Nice start!
Albert C. said...
Apr. 5, 2009 at 10:26 pm
Amanda, the rhythm is perfect and I really get a sense of the confusion and agitation. btw, thanks for the comment
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