blissful death

March 23, 2009
By jbrooks2363 BRONZE, Spring Hill, Kansas
jbrooks2363 BRONZE, Spring Hill, Kansas
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Cold feet, cold hands, why has this life ended?
The blood lays spilled over the dark dark street,
Leaving the hearts of friends and family unmended,
No longer can you feel the cold, or the heat,
Up to the heavens you go,
Never again will you ever fall,
Never again will you feel so low,
We wait, we sit, waiting for you to call,
Even though we know it will never be real,
Watching you as you suffer, gave me pain,
I can’t explain to you how I feel,
My visions of you will never wane,
I know before the lord you will kneel,
God has given you so many things,
Your life was so full of happiness,
Now you can hear while the angel sings,
Never again will you feel sadness,
Never again will you feel pain,

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on Jun. 30 2009 at 3:59 am
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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this is a beautiful poem! i really like it, and i wish i could write stuff like this. it's just...awsome!!:)

xcblue44x said...
on Apr. 11 2009 at 5:40 am
This is really good. Thanks for commenting on my work. So you play basketball too?


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