Teenage

March 22, 2009
By Mirette BRONZE, Cairo, Other
Mirette BRONZE, Cairo, Other
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Too many lights for my eyes to bear,
though curiously I look and foolishly I dare,
Hypnotized but conscious and fully aware,
that I’m trading a gem for an early stare.

Confused am I or deadly sure?
Ponderously my mind would allure,
is this disease without a cure?
Or just a thought far from pure?

Exaggeration is now my essence,
Hastiness rises and patience lessens,
every bit of sense in me deadens,
leaving the throne empty for peasants.

A feeling too tensed for me to store,
a thought I hate although I adore,
if it is painful then why is it not sore?
And if it is wrong, then why do I ask for more?

Is this a beginning or a dead end?
Should I fiercely fight back or yield and bend?
Is this a curse set upon my head?
Or is it a blessing to which I should tend?


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on Jan. 25 2010 at 2:13 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

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on Jan. 24 2010 at 10:06 pm
Mirette BRONZE, Cairo, Other
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Thanks, You made my day. I'd love to read your things.

on Jan. 24 2010 at 8:00 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

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