Deception is Life's Creation

March 22, 2009
Deception, like life’s creation,
Is inevitable, yet self controllable.
Longing answers to my burning questions.
While fighting back raging temptations.

These thoughts, so corrupt, are a constant flow.
Heart and mind battling for what to show.
Lie and tell me I’ll someday glow,
Sorry but my intentions are still to go.

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EdytD said...
May 17, 2009 at 1:16 am
nice, though i think the rhyming got in the way of a few of the lines. I'm not sure what the last line meant - the "intentions are still to go." other than that, great job! :)
thedaydreamer13 said...
May 6, 2009 at 10:44 pm
i just read ur other work and this one is just as good. nicely done brooke! :)
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