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If just her smile makes you feel,
All your worries are but bluff!
If just her sight make you say,
"Just shut it Fate!, Its enough!

If just her eyes makes you feel,
You'll get up before you fall,
If just her stay makes you say,
"This world? ,I'll challenge them all"!

If just her touch makes you feel,
There's sky,..beyond, .. and above?     
Embrace it tight don't let it go!
That's the blessing we call "Love"






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Soccergirl_MGSThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 2 at 9:27 am
That was really good! You are a very talented writer! Good job! :)
 
MushhThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 3 at 7:21 pm
Oh no I am not that much...But thank you so much for the praise I"m really honored :)
 
Soccergirl_MGSThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 4 at 9:04 am
No problem! Your poem is amazing though! It was very VERY good!
 
MushhThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 7 at 10:52 am
well though bit embarrassed to say this but do try reading the other two .. @Soccergirl_MGS It would be an honor to get a review :)
 
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