March 17, 2009
By Ariel Benites SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
Ariel Benites SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
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Love's in me and I'm in love,
Over all emotions it stands above,
Virtually indestructable and indescribable,
Each passion felt is undeniable.

Like a shooting star up in the sky,
Overcoming any obstacle that may pass by,
Very amazing and here to stay,
Everyone wishes to find it someday.

Leaving behind any past doubt,
Only having hope is what love's about,
Vanishing my fears and throwing them out the door,
Every moment passing I only love you More.

Lucky enough to have found the one,
Outlasting time itself we will Truly overcome,
Various hardships that may come along the way,
Enduring Together to see a brighter day.

The author's comments:
Each line is a letter "L,O,V,or E" because I want it to spell out LOVE so that the readers can realize the True message and topic of this poem.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Mar. 30 2009 at 8:43 pm
SmileyRiley PLATINUM, Tremont, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"You can be a victor without having victims and you can stand tall without standing on someone"

i thought it was great!

on Mar. 30 2009 at 6:44 pm
Wow, that definately is the description of Love!!

on Mar. 30 2009 at 2:18 pm
trangh_64 PLATINUM, Dallas, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"No matter how sad or mad I am, deep down in my heart, my only wish is for you to be happy." -Trang

This poem is just GREAT!!!!

The ryhming is wonderful. I love it.


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