Hell

March 17, 2009
By Mr.Trex GOLD, Salisbury, North Carolina
Mr.Trex GOLD, Salisbury, North Carolina
16 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
7 days a week, 52 weeks in a year we are all people here, we live, we love, we act suite. until that one day comes, death is the begining of life. Cody 6:17


With an expressionless face of neverending pain and mercy

My body shows clear the bone with the words that curse me

A paragraph or two of unexcapable tormented lies

From which I cannot escape, I run and run yet still I hear cries


And my body will float forever in the darkest of lakes

Surrounded by the damned souls that God just wouldn't take

Yet with a glimmer of hope everyone had a chance

The free will to do what they wanted, to dance the best dance



But some got lost finding gold to much a pleasure

Living carefree sinful lives to which they'd all forget the treasure

That being eternity spent with the king of kings

One to never turn against for your fate he brings


So I will not leave and will not run

Know were do I have to go, thine judgements already been done

Passed upon me so I know my own fate

Knowing the rules all my sinful life yet I did not hesitate

The author's comments:
My teacher insired me to start writing poems again, and since I 've yet to stop.

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KellyR GOLD said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 6:11 pm
KellyR GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
We don't read and write poetry because it's cute. We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion. And medicine, law, business, engineering, these are noble pursuits and necessary to sustain life. But poetry, beauty, romance, love, these are what we stay alive for.

I really like your poems they seem to have a lot of meaning.

Mr.Trex GOLD said...
on Apr. 1 2009 at 1:07 am
Mr.Trex GOLD, Salisbury, North Carolina
16 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
7 days a week, 52 weeks in a year we are all people here, we live, we love, we act suite. until that one day comes, death is the begining of life. Cody 6:17

i thought it was awesome,

perhaps because i wrote it




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