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Lepidoptera Spectrum

Silent, like butterflies
Making our way
The music vibrates through the air
Slowly the sky erupted
Clouds rain down from above
Colors came swift as dragonflies
Killing all the gray
No longer did we live in despair
No longer were we corrupted
Now nothing could stop our love



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mallory14 said...
Jul. 15, 2009 at 1:04 am
I think that this poem is very good, i just think that it is kind of confusing
 
RaeRae said...
Apr. 23, 2009 at 1:56 am
i meant poem, but it would be awesome if all of the gray could be killed...it really would :)
 
RaeRae said...
Apr. 22, 2009 at 1:21 am
Awesome peom! Butterflies are awesome too!!! :) But really good job!!!
 
project827 said...
Apr. 23, 2009 at 8:02 pm
i know raerae, i know. the best we can do is ignore it for now.
 
scribere said...
Apr. 8, 2009 at 5:17 pm
this is awesome (i wish it was true....). especially like the 1st two lines and the "killing the gray" line
 
pandasarereallyreallyawesome!! said...
Apr. 4, 2009 at 4:07 pm
Awesome poem. the whole insect thing is really cool.
 
onerandomguy said...
Apr. 3, 2009 at 9:38 pm
very good poem, short and sweet. I sense a girl involved . . .
 
pickleperfect3 said...
Mar. 31, 2009 at 2:15 am
Hey dude, amazing poem! I really like it! It was epic, to put it in your terms. But no, seriously, it was sweet. I love the killing the gray part. I think we all need to think about that. Keep writing!! Erin
 
Your Friend said...
Mar. 30, 2009 at 5:16 pm
That is really good!! im glad you like butterflies! so do i! keep writing poems!!
Your Buddy, Pal, Amigo and Friend
Lyndsey
 
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