Under Pressure

November 8, 2008
By XxAdamxX GOLD, Kingdom City, Missouri
XxAdamxX GOLD, Kingdom City, Missouri
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In a coffin
I'm still (barely) breathing.
Under pressure
By your dreaming.
Dying softly
From the beatings.
Hearing (your) voices
'(I) made wrong choices''
Tiny pills resolve
Those (suicide) notions,
Heavy liquors are my
Potions.
Crying softly every night,
Too scared to face
The morning's light.
Too face (your) ever constant fights.
I'm no good,
Just burn me alive.
Like firewood.


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on Mar. 29 2009 at 1:14 am
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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n.i.c.e. LOVE IT!

on Mar. 28 2009 at 11:52 pm
psycholinzmeier GOLD, Kaukauna, Wisconsin
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this is really deep and really good

on Mar. 27 2009 at 11:33 pm
(=amanda=) GOLD, Somerset, Ohio
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wow this is really deep...i like it

on Mar. 26 2009 at 11:18 pm
splatterpunk PLATINUM, Phoenix, Arizona
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Dude that is heavy man. I like it this is just what I feel and you need to do that in writing to make the reader sypithise for you and how you are feeling. But I just went through this and still am. So read some of my stuff it might help. Great job. and Keep on keepen on. :) Don't stop writing.

on Mar. 26 2009 at 7:31 pm
project827 GOLD, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Real Revolution Starts At Learning, If You're Not Angry, Then You Are Not Paying Attention" - Tim McIlrath

that is some good stuff man. excellent.


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