Tears In the Icy Rain

March 12, 2009
By Alpha_Romeo SILVER, Anniston, Alabama
Alpha_Romeo SILVER, Anniston, Alabama
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Snow falls through the tears,
Building snowdrifts on the path,
Even time can seem to freeze,
In this icy aftermath,
Yet dressed in dark,
You stand apart,
How I love this icy wind,
That stabs so deep into my skin,
Steady hours could not soothe,
Yet still I couldn't even move,
Tears are frozen across my jaw,
In such true beauty I'm just a flaw,
Now the day lives and the air is warm,
And all the snow is changig form,
Snow in treetops turns to icy rain,
And reality hits me like a train,
You were never truly there,
This pain is almost to much to bear,
My tears melt and fall with the rain,
And all thats left is a lost loves pain.

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on Mar. 24 2009 at 9:26 pm
project827 GOLD, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Real Revolution Starts At Learning, If You're Not Angry, Then You Are Not Paying Attention" - Tim McIlrath

That is so beautiful, man. Like, i am speechless now. I want to print this, frame it, and hang it up in my room. Dang.

on Mar. 24 2009 at 3:41 pm
Estelle_Star SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emtions," James A. Michener.

Wow...it is really fun of emotion. I love it, and you're a good writer.


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