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Tears In the Icy Rain

Snow falls through the tears,
Building snowdrifts on the path,
Even time can seem to freeze,
In this icy aftermath,
Yet dressed in dark,
You stand apart,
How I love this icy wind,
That stabs so deep into my skin,
Steady hours could not soothe,
Yet still I couldn't even move,
Tears are frozen across my jaw,
In such true beauty I'm just a flaw,
Now the day lives and the air is warm,
And all the snow is changig form,
Snow in treetops turns to icy rain,
And reality hits me like a train,
You were never truly there,
This pain is almost to much to bear,
My tears melt and fall with the rain,
And all thats left is a lost loves pain.





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project827 said...
Mar. 24, 2009 at 9:26 pm
That is so beautiful, man. Like, i am speechless now. I want to print this, frame it, and hang it up in my room. Dang.
 
Alaira said...
Mar. 24, 2009 at 3:41 pm
Wow...it is really fun of emotion. I love it, and you're a good writer.
 
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