This Breakup

March 14, 2009
By WritingBroken BRONZE, Hattiesburg, Mississippi
WritingBroken BRONZE, Hattiesburg, Mississippi
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I liked you alot;
But you had to go and break my heart.
What went wrong?
We were so strong .
Was it cause we were miles apart;
Or did you like me not?
Why did you leave me in the cold;
And why am i all alone?
Whatever happened to happily ever after?
You said we would be together forever.
But you changed your mind.
With me not knowing.
Now this pain is going to take some time;
But I am slowly but surely leaving this breakup behind.

The author's comments:
I worte this because I was going through my first breakup just recently and the guy was everything I've always wanted, and I was everything he wanted. But he left me and I still do not know why.

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kaylaboo12 said...
on Mar. 25 2009 at 1:11 am
this poem is good. i'm just now going through a break up and i can relate


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