My First Time

March 14, 2009
By stephen brown BRONZE, Gardner, Massachusetts
stephen brown BRONZE, Gardner, Massachusetts
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It happened on the soft green grass
Behind Meetinghouse school
I had been striking out all my life
But it was my time to show that I can do it.

My first attempt I took a swing with my bat
But missed
Then, as the moment neared, I took a chance and'
BOOM!!!!
The feeling was indescribable
I loved every moment of this extraordinary experience

I had made it to first base before
As well as second too
I had made it to third twice
But never to home

It was something I would tell all my friends about
No one would believe me at first
But luckily I had a witness
Actually I had about 40
One person was taping
And had caught every moment on tape
My dad was yelling, 'Atta boy son'
'It's about time'

I asked everyone how I looked
They said my motion was perfect
My form impeccable
I could evaluate how I did on tape for years to come

It was my first home run on a big diamond


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FULLSTOP GOLD said...
on Mar. 18 2012 at 6:35 am
FULLSTOP GOLD, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Other
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Favorite Quote:
forever and ever and ever and ever will never be enough

it was good lol my friend was laughing because she thought it was about something else! yes, shez a weird child...




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