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Crazy
March 13, 2009
I feel like the whole world is spinning but I'm standing still.
How can I act fine,
when the way my mind's twisting I'm ill.
The air is breath seeing cold.
So sick and tired of doing what I'm told.
Please.Beat me with the brick of self-control.
Let me know that I'm alive. Because what I'm feeling isn't. Save me from myself before I lose what's real.
What I feel!
Let me know me know before I go so far away.
Let me hear you say I'm not crazy.
© Lillyam P., San Jose, CA
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This article has 2 comments.
emmy147852 said...
on Mar. 27 2009 at 10:25 pm
That was really amzing. So many metaphors for how you felt! aND SIXTH GRADE, YOU WERE LIKE TEWLVE! You must have been goin through a lot. Well, I'm glad you expressed it through poetry. That's alway a good outlet. :D Keep writing!
splatterpunk PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 27 2009 at 3:00 am
Hay that is awsome. angery or not. It wasn't so much anger as much as it was a cry for help. You used a form of figurative language that basicaly said that you were going nuts because of life. But you are an excellent writer Keep writing I realy like it.
