Buried Alive

March 13, 2009
By chelchelbear BRONZE, Charleston, West Virginia
chelchelbear BRONZE, Charleston, West Virginia
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Buried alive and it starts to sink in, your deepest fears are coming alive again. It's hard to breathe and you begin to choke, hoping it's all just a sick, sick joke. Once you see that it is all real your life will be over, you can not be healed. You begin to think how can this happen to you, where you really that bad what can you do? Maybe you should say sorry for all that you did, or maybe you should ask them all to forgive. Well, just know none of it will work it's too late to apologize for being a jerk. You might as well get over it it's the hand you were dealt. It's the feeling you'll always feel, the feeling you've always felt.



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


Alik_=) SILVER said...
on May. 1 2009 at 6:12 pm
Alik_=) SILVER, Rochester, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 19 comments
it was good, but you need stanzas, line breaks - but I guess it works for this because you can easily tell where they would be

on Apr. 27 2009 at 2:47 pm
chelchelbear BRONZE, Charleston, West Virginia
1 article 0 photos 5 comments
hope you like this but if you dont get over it!...j/k j/k... please dont critize to harsh




MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!