Montreat

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Yes,




this is where You belong.

right Here.
with These people.
at This moment.

You belong

Here.

Today,
Tomorrow,
to learn,
to renew,
to Love.
and-
above all,
to Feel loved.





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peapod416 said...
Jun. 5, 2012 at 7:34 pm
Which week do you go to Montreat? I'm going week 2 which is next week
 
Katie09 said...
Mar. 27, 2009 at 2:16 pm
ASHLEY :)

I really love this poem especially the emphasis you put on "These people and This moment" by having the T's capitalized. Thi spoem in great and I can't wait to read more of your work.

-Katie
 
CarolDye91 said...
Mar. 25, 2009 at 1:59 pm
Ashley,

I am so happy that you submitted this! I really enjoyed reading it and helping you with yoru critique and I think that the way it turned out is perfect. I like how you made the title Montreat because that lets everybody know its a place (like we had talked about). The capitalizations that you used were perfect and I think that the whole "and-" thing worked out great. Good job :)
 
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