Montreat

March 13, 2009
By Ashley Freeman BRONZE, Fairfax Station, Virginia
Ashley Freeman BRONZE, Fairfax Station, Virginia
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Yes,




this is where You belong.

right Here.
with These people.
at This moment.

You belong

Here.

Today,
Tomorrow,
to learn,
to renew,
to Love.
and-
above all,
to Feel loved.


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on Jun. 5 2012 at 7:34 pm
peapod416 PLATINUM, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"A smart girl know their limits, a wise girl knows she has none." Marilyn Monroe

Which week do you go to Montreat? I'm going week 2 which is next week

Katie09 said...
on Mar. 27 2009 at 2:16 pm
ASHLEY :)



I really love this poem especially the emphasis you put on "These people and This moment" by having the T's capitalized. Thi spoem in great and I can't wait to read more of your work.



-Katie

CarolDye91 said...
on Mar. 25 2009 at 1:59 pm
Ashley,



I am so happy that you submitted this! I really enjoyed reading it and helping you with yoru critique and I think that the way it turned out is perfect. I like how you made the title Montreat because that lets everybody know its a place (like we had talked about). The capitalizations that you used were perfect and I think that the whole "and-" thing worked out great. Good job :)


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