Clarissa For Who She Really Is

March 10, 2009
By CANDY913 BRONZE, Shreveport, Louisiana
CANDY913 BRONZE, Shreveport, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
giving up doesnt always mean ur weak it just means your strong enough to let go


the first day i met you i was skeptical
never knowing of your opsticals
you jumped in from the get go
i thought you were a little skitzo
then i got to know you for who you really are
you shined bright as a star
i love you and you feel the same even though i thought you were a little insane


The author's comments:
this is a bout a girl that i met in the hospital and we've been throgh the same obstacals

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ktbug96 SILVER said...
on May. 14 2010 at 9:15 pm
ktbug96 SILVER, Jericho, New York
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Favorite Quote:
~Make a wish, it's up to you, find the strength inside, and watch your dreams come true, you don't need a shooting star, the magic's right there in your heart, close your eyes, believe, and make a wish~ (yes it's from a song :D)

This poem has such a sweet idea in it, but it would've been better if you used proper grammar. :) Very good though!

on Mar. 15 2010 at 11:33 pm
CANDY913 BRONZE, Shreveport, Louisiana
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
giving up doesnt always mean ur weak it just means your strong enough to let go

please comment my poem


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