Empty Thoughts

March 10, 2009
By Tyler Miller BRONZE, Big Prairie, Ohio
Tyler Miller BRONZE, Big Prairie, Ohio
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When the nights are long and cold,
and the days are lonesome and blue,
and the tears begin to get old,
my thoughts always drift to you.
When my heart is quickly breaking,
and I'm forced to search my mind
for something to stop the aching,
you are the one I find.
When I'm feeling helpless and weak,
you give me the strength to move on.
When I'm broken and cannot speak,
you give me the words through song.
The happiness I know with you
is like nothing I've felt before.
When once all was closed from view,
now you have opened the door
and released my hidden emotions,
released my heart and soul,
my deepest love and devotion,
finally making me whole.
If we are forced to be apart,
throughout everything you do,
please know that you are in my heart,
and that I'm always thinking of you.


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knights123 said...
on Apr. 7 2009 at 6:19 pm
i love this poem!! :)

on Apr. 7 2009 at 6:17 pm
OMG Tyler i love this poem btw this is Steph anyways this is really good i love it!

on Apr. 7 2009 at 6:13 pm
You did really well with this piece of work.

l.m. said...
on Mar. 29 2009 at 9:37 pm
WOW!! I absolutely love the poem!! It really speaks to me!!

skippy said...
on Mar. 27 2009 at 6:05 pm
Keep writing! I want to read more! You have talent!

-skippy

jaufedyruwy said...
on Mar. 25 2009 at 4:03 pm
good job with your poem







swooooooooooooooooooooooooop

77 said...
on Mar. 25 2009 at 3:26 pm
Wow, a young man with a command of the English language and the courage to use it! Well done!

like.rawr said...
on Mar. 25 2009 at 11:50 am
awwwwwwwww lil bro that roxxx

Brock L. said...
on Mar. 24 2009 at 5:44 pm
tyler my best bud and it was so alsome i love you

dj said...
on Mar. 24 2009 at 5:26 pm
This is awsome poem it is relly deep

on Mar. 24 2009 at 4:55 pm
Well-written poem!! Shows that you are very talented with using words!! Keep up the good work and good luck with track this season!!

BC said...
on Mar. 24 2009 at 1:07 pm
Awesome poem!

skippy said...
on Mar. 24 2009 at 1:06 pm
Tyler, Your poem shows that you are a caring person and a deep thinker. It is brave of you to share these emotions. You have a nice free style that is easy to read. Love it! -skippy


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