My Doors

March 10, 2009
By Sasha-Bear PLATINUM, Lockhart, Texas
Sasha-Bear PLATINUM, Lockhart, Texas
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im locking my own doors. closing myself in from the outside. shes screaming but out my mouth reigns silence. quietly i follow but shes kicking in the walls. what can i do? mourn in myself or fall to my knees in public. i can never fall, i was never taught, so let me sit in this torture chamber, let her beat below the surface, we'll be of no like in public and cry together in secret. Ill be perfect like they want.


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on Apr. 8 2010 at 1:48 pm

its like having two selves. the one you show to the world, who they want you to be, and the one you keep hidden, the one no one wants to see.

You can smile on the surface, but be beating yourself up on the inside. Because the one you keep hidden wants to be let out, wants to be known


on Mar. 21 2009 at 1:13 am
project827 GOLD, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Real Revolution Starts At Learning, If You're Not Angry, Then You Are Not Paying Attention" - Tim McIlrath

very good writing, i love your writing. But i really have no idea whats going on in this one. ?-shrug-?

on Mar. 21 2009 at 12:00 am
splatterpunk PLATINUM, Phoenix, Arizona
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interesting vary well written. keep writing

on Mar. 19 2009 at 8:39 pm
sissykat PLATINUM, Royal Oak, Michigan
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i love this. this i very well written. i think that you are a great writer.




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