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Misery

March 9, 2009
By beccaahhh PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
beccaahhh PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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You make my heart go black
The cut in my arm bleed
The tears roll down my face,
And you can live with a smile on your face.
The misery builds inside me,
the heaviness along with it.
My heart pounds faster,
as i hold the knife on my arm.
The reasons i do this,
Pour out like the pills in my hand.
You are the reason,
Why my life has become a big, black, empty, hole.



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on Mar. 23 2009 at 7:44 pm
beccaahhh PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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thanks so much.

i think a lot of people can relate to this and im glad.

read my other work if you want, i think its still pending though

on Mar. 22 2009 at 10:38 pm
ModernBoredom BRONZE, Lake Forest Park, Washington
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This is a really, good poem. You are seriously an awesome writer! Something like that happened to me, thankfully I was too afraid of the consequences. but you are a really, good writer! And yes, I am a girl!

on Mar. 22 2009 at 1:25 am
beccaahhh PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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thank you so much.

i hope everything turns out ok with you

on Mar. 21 2009 at 8:12 pm
psycholinzmeier GOLD, Kaukauna, Wisconsin
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i know exactly how u feel cuz i feel like tht right now

ur an amazing writer great poem

on Mar. 21 2009 at 1:31 pm
beccaahhh PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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that happened to me but worse.

i was in love with this guy,

and he loved another girl.

-the writer

on Mar. 21 2009 at 1:54 am
Estelle_Star SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emtions," James A. Michener.

I can't say that I know how you feel myself, but it sounds like something one of my friends would write. She's in "love" with one of her ex's, but he doesn't care for her anymore.

on Mar. 20 2009 at 12:01 am
beccaahhh PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
24 articles 0 photos 7 comments
thank you so much.

im the writer by the way

on Mar. 19 2009 at 8:41 pm
sissykat PLATINUM, Royal Oak, Michigan
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OMG! i love your writing. you are a wonderful writer. i know exactly how you feel.


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