The Empty One

March 9, 2009
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He stands beside
an ancient grave
A scarlet tear falls
from His pale cheek
His raven hair hiding
crimson eyes
The person He called Life
murdered in revenge
Centuries had past
but His soul remains empty
His thoughtd blank
His heart Ice

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evan P. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 26, 2009 at 10:49 pm
real nice. I felt cold at the end of it, and its really warm here lol
project827 said...
Mar. 22, 2009 at 5:38 pm
you, my friend, are a genius.
Vexa_Rave said...
Mar. 20, 2009 at 6:27 pm
wow... this one's REALLY good. O_O you've got to get at least one poem in the magazine, i swear!! ^_^
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