Life Won

March 9, 2009
You're falling through thorns.
You're drowning in an abyss.
You're choking on air.
And you can't even miss.
All that you've been through,
Can't believe you got so far!

You've been shot with hurt.
Stabbed by exsistance.
And killed by love.
You still go on,
Knowing all you've worked for is gone.

Stop being ravenous over regret.
Stop loathing over guilt.
Stop devouring your beautiful soul,
Because you know it isn't over.

There is love in life you charish.
There is hurt in the world you run from.
But is frogivness from the heaven above.

You just need to know where to find it.
Knowing that the thorns won't pirece.
The abyss will end.
And your breath will be plenty.

Feeling that hurt will dwindle.
Eyeing that exsistance much longer.
And adoring the love around you.

All your regret will turn empty.
Your guilt will fade,
And your soul will be renewed.

Just trust what I say...

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baron said...
Mar. 25, 2009 at 4:12 am
I deeply apriciate that you took the time to read and comment on my work. I hope you read and enjoy more. And I realy enjoy your work you have a large promise in writing. Keep it I hope you don't lose your passion. Your friend Nathan aka baron
Brittany! said...
Mar. 23, 2009 at 3:37 am
Okay! People just to just say, this poem is not about me. I forgot to mention it that I wrote it about my best friends.
baron said...
Mar. 20, 2009 at 12:42 am
wow that is good. You seem to have problem and express them trough your writing. look up one of my poems it just might help. Great job.
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