Sunshine and Rain

March 7, 2009
By SmileyRiley PLATINUM, Tremont, Illinois
SmileyRiley PLATINUM, Tremont, Illinois
30 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can be a victor without having victims and you can stand tall without standing on someone"


From sloshing through mud puddles
To blowing bubbles
From singing into a brush
To being hurt by our first crush
We go together through and through
We've been through tests of pride and virtue
We've always found the answers in each other
And then would rant about the annoyance of a brother
Now we have tails of flaunts and fails
And through it all our friendship found ways to avail
We often act young and inane
But through sunshine and rain
We always stuck together
Like the worlds strongest tether
An though some times were tough
We knew we would never have enough
Of one another


The author's comments:
This piece is dedicated to my best friend morgan, i hope everyone can relate to it like all best friends can. =)

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Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Aug. 22 2009 at 2:17 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

Wow. This is actually pretty good. You have a talent and you know how to relate to people. Keep writing. God bless, ...,

on Jun. 10 2009 at 5:45 pm
morgie7<3 PLATINUM, Tremont, Illinois
34 articles 0 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I've missed more than 9000 shots in my career. I've lost almost 300 games. 26 times, I've been trusted to take the game winning shot and missed. I've failed over and over and over again in my life. And that is why I succeed."
~Michael Jordan

number 22. good job!

ff5fan SILVER said...
on Apr. 7 2009 at 5:55 pm
ff5fan SILVER, Loganville, Georgia
7 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let us so live that when we come to die even the undertaker will be sorry.
-Mark Twain

i can totally relate to this!

great job!

on Apr. 2 2009 at 11:39 pm
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
75 articles 11 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

Wow i can really relate with this. Rhyme scheme is good, and the simplicy of the words are very good

PK4evr ELITE said...
on Apr. 2 2009 at 6:12 pm
PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
105 articles 5 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!

this is cute. and makes me jealous. :)

yah you commented on one of my poems (i think) so i checked out your stuff too. you're a good writer!

Janie6932 said...
on Apr. 1 2009 at 9:51 pm
wow im so jealous of you and your best friends realatinship. it sounds like you guys are really close and you protray it so well through this poem. also, your other stuff is really good! a thousand stars to you!

teach said...
on Apr. 1 2009 at 4:40 pm
What a wonderful poem! I love your vocabulary!

ALeX<3 said...
on Mar. 31 2009 at 9:03 pm
this is soooooo good! Keep writing!

morgie7<3 said...
on Mar. 29 2009 at 7:44 pm
I also rated your other writing smilieriley<3! keep up the good work!

ish2013 SILVER said...
on Mar. 25 2009 at 2:04 am
ish2013 SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 1 comment
omg i can soo relate to it .............u are really good at this keep going :)

on Mar. 24 2009 at 10:38 pm
morgie7<3 PLATINUM, Tremont, Illinois
34 articles 0 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I've missed more than 9000 shots in my career. I've lost almost 300 games. 26 times, I've been trusted to take the game winning shot and missed. I've failed over and over and over again in my life. And that is why I succeed."
~Michael Jordan

i lovvve u forever my bff!


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