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Sunshine and Rain

From sloshing through mud puddles
To blowing bubbles
From singing into a brush
To being hurt by our first crush
We go together through and through
We've been through tests of pride and virtue
We've always found the answers in each other
And then would rant about the annoyance of a brother
Now we have tails of flaunts and fails
And through it all our friendship found ways to avail
We often act young and inane
But through sunshine and rain
We always stuck together
Like the worlds strongest tether
An though some times were tough
We knew we would never have enough
Of one another



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Jaquie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 22, 2009 at 2:17 pm:
Wow. This is actually pretty good. You have a talent and you know how to relate to people. Keep writing. God bless, ...,
 
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morgie7<3 said...
Jun. 10, 2009 at 5:45 pm:
number 22. good job!
 
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ff5fan said...
Apr. 7, 2009 at 5:55 pm:
i can totally relate to this!
great job!
 
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annkaykay2011This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 2, 2009 at 11:39 pm:
Wow i can really relate with this. Rhyme scheme is good, and the simplicy of the words are very good
 
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PK4evr This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 2, 2009 at 6:12 pm:
this is cute. and makes me jealous. :)
yah you commented on one of my poems (i think) so i checked out your stuff too. you're a good writer!
 
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Janie6932 said...
Apr. 1, 2009 at 9:51 pm:
wow im so jealous of you and your best friends realatinship. it sounds like you guys are really close and you protray it so well through this poem. also, your other stuff is really good! a thousand stars to you!
 
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ALeX<3 said...
Mar. 31, 2009 at 9:03 pm:
this is soooooo good! Keep writing!
 
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morgie7<3 said...
Mar. 29, 2009 at 7:44 pm:
I also rated your other writing smilieriley<3! keep up the good work!
 
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ish2013 said...
Mar. 25, 2009 at 2:04 am:
omg i can soo relate to it .............u are really good at this keep going :)
 
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Morgan K. said...
Mar. 24, 2009 at 10:38 pm:
i lovvve u forever my bff!
 
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teach said...
Apr. 1, 2009 at 4:40 pm:
What a wonderful poem! I love your vocabulary!
 
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