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Drowning as I fall apart

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Who can see the sorrow in my closed heart?
Drowning as I fall apart,
Who can see tears hidden beneath wiping hands?
In this world full of demands,
Who knows the mistakes I constantly regret ?
Don't say sorry, not yet,
Who of this vast world knows the thoughts that race through my mind?
Don't say you wont leave me this time,
Drowning as I fall apart,
I was drowning from the start,
Ever dreaming, never living,
Alive and yet dead
Drowning as I fall apart,
Was I drowning from the start?





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Kagome103 said...
Mar. 19, 2009 at 10:50 pm
Well... that was soo good... its like it expresses what u fell and cant put into words!!!!! What pple cant see and dont understand in u. Janeth that was reallllly GOOD ~thumbs up~
 
Taquasia D. said...
Mar. 19, 2009 at 10:29 pm
Coolios Gaara Buddy This Rox. I like it You Should also Post it on Poem Hunter.com
 
PoLee said...
Mar. 19, 2009 at 3:28 am
u the best!!! love it! u go girl!!!!
 
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