Drowning as I fall apart

March 7, 2009
By Janeth Diggs-White BRONZE, Kingston, Other
Janeth Diggs-White BRONZE, Kingston, Other
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Who can see the sorrow in my closed heart?
Drowning as I fall apart,
Who can see tears hidden beneath wiping hands?
In this world full of demands,
Who knows the mistakes I constantly regret ?
Don't say sorry, not yet,
Who of this vast world knows the thoughts that race through my mind?
Don't say you wont leave me this time,
Drowning as I fall apart,
I was drowning from the start,
Ever dreaming, never living,
Alive and yet dead
Drowning as I fall apart,
Was I drowning from the start?


The author's comments:
When I'm alone, I think about my life and I write what I feel at the time. This was what I came up with, recently...

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Kagome103 said...
on Mar. 19 2009 at 10:50 pm
Well... that was soo good... its like it expresses what u fell and cant put into words!!!!! What pple cant see and dont understand in u. Janeth that was reallllly GOOD ~thumbs up~

on Mar. 19 2009 at 10:29 pm
ShikysOnlyLover, New York, New York
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Coolios Gaara Buddy This Rox. I like it You Should also Post it on Poem Hunter.com

PoLee said...
on Mar. 19 2009 at 3:28 am
u the best!!! love it! u go girl!!!!




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